Your Questions About Child Obesity Introduction Essay

Help with my english essay plzzz..?

I have to write an essay on whether I agree if the school district should stop offering PE i already have obesity so If u have any ideas it would be great

and oh i disagree I think that they should not stop offering it
thanks

Is My College Application essay good enough?

My Rebirth

Looking back on the past five years of my life, I wonder how I ever came so far. How did that proud young Nazi, that staunch fascist and passion-led creature ever become the critical thinking feminist, cultural rebel, and amateur philosopher she is now? It may have begun in the invasion of Palestine in 1948, or even when my mother remarried, but the wheels were truly set in motion on August 23, 2006, the day my father died.
My parents had been an incongruous couple. My father, born in the mid-fifties to a protestant family of farmers, carefree and lighthearted, and my mother, a “beautiful exotic” as my paternal aunt called her, from Northwestern Africa, a devout Muslim, ambitious, passionate and always ready to vehemently contend with any who slighted her or voiced opinions contrary to her own. They were good for each other; they moderated each other, checking the other’s extreme tendencies.
My mother changed after his death; her scathing criticism intensified, her disdain for American culture turned into disgust and her political agenda turned extreme. Maybe it was the fact that after my father’s death his family cut ties with ours, or her inability to moderate herself, or some inner weakness within. Nonetheless, my father’s death marked my indoctrination into antisemitism and Islamic Fundamentalism.
Americans, my mother taught me, were selfish, promiscuous, fat, belligerent, stupid, and above all, irreligious. My father’s family was held as the prime example of American sinfulness. Their selfish individualism in abandoning us, Cousin Louise’s promiscuity with her illegitimate child, Cousin Cassie’s obesity, Uncle Joe’s aggressive foreign policy, Cousin Steven’s poor grades and work ethic, and their sinfully lenient approach to religion. Happy memories of my paternal family were slowly eroded by time, my mother’s lessons, and their absence. In time, I came to hate them as false devils that represented all evil in the world.
I worshiped my mother, her being the only person in the world that would die for me as she constantly reminded me. Her words were sacred truth. Jews were liars who invented the Holocaust to garner pity and invade Palestine, the only acceptable form of law was Islamic Sharia, women were meant to be obedient to men, and freedom of speech was the devil’s invention. I proudly brought her beliefs to school and accepted ostracism and loneliness to come home to her praise and welcoming arms. At twelve, I possessed the answers to all the great questions in life, needing only to ask my mother and I would be enlightened. It wasn’t until my mother’s remarriage that I would start questioning.
Her new husband was a chauvinist whom she slavishly obeyed. Suddenly I could no longer speak with my male friends, I was forbidden from listening to music, and my beloved art was destroyed. My mother disowned me when she learned I had called the authorities when her husband attempted to molest me. In the midst of my pain a single, rebellious thought occurred to me: my thoughts have value. The supernova of my mind was sparked by that single thought and from the dust I have been reborn an ignorant but pure individual. I do not regret the things I have experienced; otherwise I would never have changed. I have been unable to stop thinking: are my perceptions real? Can the individual exist without Society? Does anyone truly do good or evil sincerely? I don’t know these answers, along with many others, but I do know one thing: I will always pursue truth and there is no greater peace than the peace of truth.

Do you think this is good enough to get into Wellesley? I only have a 3.0 but I’ve always taken the most difficult classes and I got a perfect 800 on the reading section of the SAT and I’m the president of a philosphy club and a volunteer club.

Please help me write a 5 -paragraph argumentative essay on the topics as follows:?

Topic 1: In some countries, people have boycotted fast food chains because they feel that they pose a threat to the national character of their cities. Write an essay in which you either support or oppose the growth of fast food chains around the world.
Topic 2: In America, adopted children can now find out the identity of their birth parents. Write an essay in which u explain whether this is a good or bad idea.
#3: In some countries, voting in national elections is mandatory, but in the U.S, there are no laws forcing people to vote. Discuss why voting should or should not be mandatory,
#4: Despite the many timesaving devices in our homes, people today are working harder and longer. Explain whether it would be better for people to work less and have more leisure time.
#5: Whether or not you think new technology such as cell phones, computers, and DVDs benefit the society.
#6: Whether or not you think it should be legal to download or share copyrighted material from the Internet.
P/s: These are 6 essays that need finishing. You can help me with any topics you think you are good at or give me outlines for these essays. All your help would be fully appreciated with 5 point reward. Anyway, thank you in advance for your interest.

How to go about in structuring this Sociology essay?

Hello, just finished researching for this essay, the title of which is “we should be especially concerned about the effects of TV advertising on children. Discuss”. My biggest downfall in essay writing is usually the structure – it is all over the place. I’ve chosen to focus on a number of areas: stereotypes, materialism, imitation, commodity fetishism, obesity and finally the other side of the argument – that advertising also affects other groups and such. I’ve compiled research on all of this now, it’s just putting it together. If anyone can advise me this would be really good. Thanks a lot 🙂

Review and help with my essay please?

Please help. It’s due tomorrow. I’m aware that my grammar, lit, etc sucks or is basically very poor. Since english is not my mother tongue, I was born chinese. Please do NOT go easy on me.
It’s a talk by the way.
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Good morning to Mrs C. and my fellow classmates. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to talk about ways to stay healthy.

There are many ways to stay healthy. Firstly, exercising regularly at certain times of the day can increase strength in our muscles as well as keep our heart strong. It is also good to keep sports such as jogging, swimming and playing tennis as a hobby.

It is also important to keep a balanced diet. There are many choices of food that provides the necessary nutritious that our body needs. Bread, cereals and grains are some sources of carbohydrates, eating fruits and vegetables as well as meat, fish and dairy products will help to built up fibre and proteins that our body needed. However, consuming too much fat and sugar will cause harm to our body, a good advice is too avoid these food. Besides that, drinking plenty of water is also good for our health.

Lastly, we should also get enough sleep and rest everyday, avoid going to bed late at night and do not overwork oneself. Thank you for listening to my speech.
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That’s it! I’m pretty proud of it actually, but I now it still needs work. Please help, thanks!
Oh and, it’s meant to be short, by teacher’s request.
The Collage Boy- Hey, that’s not very nice. I just started taking up english, and it took me quite a while to write this. The teacher was going easy one me by letting me write a short speech, but I wanted a review because I have to reach it in class tomorrow… :/